[Phpmyadmin-devel] Proofreading request

[Dieter Adriaenssens]

2011/9/24 Tyron Madlener <tyronx at gmail.com>:
> Hello guys,
> This may not be entirely related to phpMyAdmin, but I still hope I can get
> some help here :)
> I'm using the Google Summer of Code Project as my bachelor's thesis and I've
> gotten request from my mentor that it should be proofread by other persons
> than me.
> So I'd be really glad if some would find the time to fly over my paper and
> let me know what I've messed up ;-)
> The paper is available here: http://www.tyron.at/tmp/thesis.pdf (not
> entirely finished yet)
>
> Thanks a lot,
>   - Tyron

Hi Tyron,

It's convenient you can use your work on GSoC for your thesis as well! :)

What kind of feedback do you expect? Structural and content related
comments? Or also typos and layout issues?
I skimmed the first pages and I noticed you use references (to
phpMyAdmin, Google, Facebook), but f.e. you didn't put a reference
(news item, commit, ...) next to the statement that the latter two
submitted performance related patches to MySQL. I believe it is
customary in academic papers to add references for every
statement/claim you use. Do you have to do this?

Kind regards,

Dieter