2011/9/24 Tyron Madlener tyronx@gmail.com:

Hello guys, This may not be entirely related to phpMyAdmin, but I still hope I can get some help here :) I'm using the Google Summer of Code Project as my bachelor's thesis and I've gotten request from my mentor that it should be proofread by other persons than me. So I'd be really glad if some would find the time to fly over my paper and let me know what I've messed up ;-) The paper is available here: http://www.tyron.at/tmp/thesis.pdf (not entirely finished yet)

Thanks a lot,   - Tyron

Hi Tyron,

It's convenient you can use your work on GSoC for your thesis as well! :)

What kind of feedback do you expect? Structural and content related comments? Or also typos and layout issues? I skimmed the first pages and I noticed you use references (to phpMyAdmin, Google, Facebook), but f.e. you didn't put a reference (news item, commit, ...) next to the statement that the latter two submitted performance related patches to MySQL. I believe it is customary in academic papers to add references for every statement/claim you use. Do you have to do this?

Kind regards,

Dieter